L.I: To write a stretched sentence.
Who: The bird sang.
What: The bird sang fluently
When: As the sun rose behind the snowy mountain, The bird sang fluently,
Where: As the sun rose behind the snowy mountain, The bird sang fluently on a long tree branch,
Why:As the sun rose behind the snowy mountain, the bird sang fluently on a long tree branch to wake up the birds. BEFORE
L.I: To use DRAFT to check our sentences.
Why: As the sun rose behind the snowy mountain, the bird sang fluently on a long tree branch to wake up the other birds.
to awaken the birds, yet they were a mile away. AFTER
This is mine and my partner Ana's stretched sentences. We had to write a simple sentence and stretch it out using DRAFT, AAWWWUBBIS, FANBOYS and the 5 W's. Next we had pick another partner to edit pur sentences.