Using Draft In Our Writing

L.I: To write a stretched sentence.

Who: The bird sang.

What: The bird sang fluently

When: As the sun rose behind the snowy mountain, The bird sang fluently,

                    

Where: As the sun rose behind the snowy mountain, The bird sang fluently on a long tree branch,

Why:As the sun rose behind the snowy mountain, the bird sang fluently on a long tree branch to wake up the birds. BEFORE

L.I: To use DRAFT to check our sentences.

Why: As the sun rose behind the snowy mountain, the bird sang fluently on a long tree branch to wake up the other birds.

                          to awaken the birds, yet they were a mile away. AFTER

This is mine and my partner Ana's stretched sentences.  We had to write a simple sentence and stretch it out using DRAFT, AAWWWUBBIS, FANBOYS and the 5 W's.  Next we had pick another partner to edit pur sentences.