On a winter day, a class of kids were heading towards the trees. Everyone could hear each other's footsteps when they were running, and they could see each worried expressions on the other kids faces.
This is my beginning of my narrative.
I had to describe the picture by using the clues that were given to us by the image.
Hi Mahdia,
ReplyDeleteI really like your orientation but maybe it would be more interesting if you used some speech marks. It would be more interesting because you are wanting to hook your reading in if you are writing your orientation.Nice start to your writing.