Onomatopoeia Recount Writing

‘Bang’ I was only 8 years old at my new house when I fell down out of my bed after a horrible nightmare. I got up from the floor and went to bed rubbing my head when my mum came into my room.

When my mum heard the bang she came and woke me up and I told her I had a headache she said that I bumped my head. She went out of my room into the kitchen and brought me an ice bag and the ice bag was freezing cold. Then I went to bed again.

In the morning when I got up I had a bump in my head and the worst thing about the bump was when I touched it it got worse.

Then my mum told me not to touch it and I didn’t touched the bump and after a couple of days it got better and and finally it was gone.

It was so annoying having a huge bump in my head because it hurt a lot and it was a huge bump.
In our classroom we had to write about something when we were little, and we had to write it by using onomatopoeia. We had to use onomatopoeia so we can hook our reader in our writing.